Pretty awesome for a first
That's pretty awesome for your first flash movie! About the only thing I found to complain about was the somewhat sub-par English; I'm assuming it's not your native language, especially since you put an Asian character on one of the bars.
The opening, for example, could say "In the heart of each of us lives a beast who feasts on spite and detestation. I'll show you which kind of beast lives inside of me." - by the way, detestation is a fairly rare word, I wasn't even sure it existed 'till I googled it. Maybe use a more common one such as 'abhorrence'? The end should be closer to "And what does your beast look like?"
As for animation, it was pretty smooth and awesome. The music fit fairly well, and it only felt a bit clunky here and there. Definitely keep animating, I personally think you will do very well in it if you keep going! ^.=.^
Yes, I really don't know eng well) But i accept your advices))
Pretty good; few things though--
It's not that bad; certainly something fun to watch, actually. Didn't quite understand it all, like what the guy did to survive the fireball, but maybe you're not meant to get all of a stick-figure action movie *Chuckles*
Though, near te end when the "bad" guy is finally decapitated, the animation is rather jerky... as that deliberatE? For it looked like it simply slowed down to a few frames per second as in the animation quality ran down, sadly.
Otherwise, good job ^^
yea that last bit was sappost to be a slowmo bit...but it didnt really work out.
It's quite nice, quite sleek in design, I think. I like the fact that bloodstains linger on places you've died.
There could be more indication given for when controls are disabled -- a few times I found myself wondering why I couldn't move, only to find that there was more dialogue flowing.
Medals, sadly, don't work. I'm not sure if that's just me, or if it's global, though. I've gotten all 75 stars but have yet to unlock a single medal, even after restarting.
The physics of jumping is quite good, I think. I feel like I recognize the music from somewhere, but I'm not sure where! Either way, it seems rather well made overall. Good job! Perhaps add some more story in future -- this one felt like it was building up to something but had no follow through, I felt.
4/5 in any case!
The gameplay felt like it could have done with a touch more variation, but since I can't come up with any suggestions myself, I can't in good conscience dock you any points for that!
It was a lot of fun to play... but I think more fun was the hundreds of signs saying "haxxor". That got me. It made me smile.
Your game is great in any respect. Grand job! :D
This is quite fun and original, I think. The lack of music seems fairly fitting, and I didn't even notice it until after I had finished.
Unfortunately, I finished fairly early after a monster wandered off screen and vanished -- it was the final monster of the wave, so I was left standing there unable to finish, and had to simply let myself die.
It's only a small bug, but it can break the game, so I can't give this a full five stars. It is a good submission for the Ludum Dare, in my opinion at least!
Reflective and Dark
I really enjoyed this. It's been done very well, I think.
However, I can't help but feel that the percussion at the beginning could perhaps be toned down. But that may just be me.
Either way, I really loved how you put this together. One thing I can say for sure from this, is that I'm watching you, now. *Grins*
Keep up your music, it's really good, and I think you're quite talented with ambient pieces here.
It feels like the sort of thing you might hear while credits roll for an espionage movie, perhaps. Something like that.
Either way, excellent. I wont give it 10, as the beginning does feel a little clunky in comparison to the later parts, but ... Yes. Excellent work -- *saved*!
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